Wednesday 9 May 2012

Everything in the Garden by Jo Verity

Jo Verity’s debut novel is a fascinating read. The story is a straightforward tale of four sets of middle-aged friends who jointly buy a large rambling farmhouse in Wales, intending to grow old together. However, tensions grow within the group, particularly for the main protagonist Anna when her best friend’s husband Bill starts making passes at her.

For any novelist it’s quite a challenge having a group of eight main characters and creating sufficient differentiation between them that a reader can easily remember them and readily identify just who is who. I must admit that I resorted to making a little list of the four couples, just so that I could remember who was married to whom.

Also Peter and Mark are hardly mentioned, leaving just the six main characters to juggle, along with a large supporting cast of daughters, boyfriends and friends. The good news is that Jo Verity juggles with consummate ease, and she creates a readable and plausible story which relies more on emotions than upon simple plot devices.

Not everything in this particular garden is rosy and eventually the plot takes a progressively darker tone. I’d be interested to see Jo try writing a dark thriller; I have a feeling she’d be quite successful.

If I am being picky I think she could have concentrated a little more on the character of Prosser in the earlier stages of the book, particularly as he has such a key part to play later on. But her real strength as a writer is revealed in her deft handling of the character of Anna who is utterly believable with a credible voice. I found myself rooting for Anna on many levels, which must be a testament to the empathy that Jo manages to create.

If I’m being honest I think I would have to say that as a novel I preferred “Not Funny Not Clever” more. However given that this novel is a much earlier work it is well worth reading to see a writer honing her craft. For me “Everything in the Garden” is well worth cultivating.

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